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It reigns

Posted by penguin_starborn
Tags: poetry, poem

It rains
It pours
It is a mile tall and never speaks
Just carries our water on leaden feet
Blinking powerlight moon-sun eyes
Peer blindly, feet step on millennial pits
From here to the forbidden lake, and back

It washes down
It pulls down
It is a god of rust and roaring waterfalls
Just and merciful, we were told
As old as us, or ours as old as it
Sinners earn places in its footsteps
Its feet red with rust so blest

It is bitter
It is foul
It is what it is, mark my word: a machine
Just! just! juddering footsteps rappelling ropes
Past red veils we see the flesh of god
Trace copyright prayers on a boxed brain
My hands on the conduit --- behold your new god!

My wrath rains
My anger pours
It is the vessel of my cunning, this old god
Just! just! dance new steps on old enemies
Kicked castles and soldier ants, crawling in
Head homunculus locked in the iron skull
Feet heavy, leads done, dead god gone dry.

Inspirations: the god warrior in Nausica of the Valley of the Wind, Unicron at the end of the G1 Transformers comic (poor old Scorponok*), rereading Girl Genius, casual flipping through Attack on Titan, awareness that there's some movie called the Wicker Man, and realization that I should go back to the classics and watch all of Mobile Suit Gundam and Zeta Gundam; and "Naught but the Leg remaining to disclose the site of this forgotten Babylon".

*: Well, real Transformers poetry would end with "It is over --- finished!"

3 comments

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    39hp
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    Ahktchully, a Transformers poem would end with “roll out.” Also, another awesome poem :)

    Ahktchully, a Transformers poem would end with “roll out.”

    Also, another awesome poem :)

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    1. penguin_starborn
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      Thanks. Though the other half ends with "STAAARSCREEAAAM!" and a comedy wah-wah-wah sound effect. Come to think of it, "Autobots, Transform and Roll Out!" kind of sounds like "My friends and...

      Thanks. Though the other half ends with "STAAARSCREEAAAM!" and a comedy wah-wah-wah sound effect.

      Come to think of it, "Autobots, Transform and Roll Out!" kind of sounds like "My friends and Zoidberg".

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  2. overextrapolator
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    Wow, nice - in particular, the rhythm from "It is bitter ..." down to "...new god!" is lovely. Thanks for sharing!

    Wow, nice - in particular, the rhythm from "It is bitter ..." down to "...new god!" is lovely.

    Thanks for sharing!