18 votes

hey i have a question

it's kinda silly

kinda nothing

but i was thinkin

kinda wondering

hey.

if i asked.

would you pick the loose string from my sweater

bring a blanket in cloudy weather

go with me on an adventure

give a little hug, a little pressure

would you grab a little snack

put my favorite towel on the rack

hear me sing, and try not to laugh

or light a blunt, hit twice, and pass

help me dye my hair

tell me i look cute in underwear

text me just to say you're there

snap your cookie just to share

or rub my neck soft when it hurts

tell my i've a way with words

walk to the park when wind's absurd

just to sip a tea and watch the birds

tell me that you like my lips

pick me clothes out for a trip

head to the lake to skinny dip

and blush a bit because you like my hips

could you

sweat with me at the gym

fill our popcorn to the brim

say that this shirt makes me look slim

and maybe love me limb from limb

instead of him

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3 comments

  1. [3]
    FoxPopuli
    Link
    I like this

    I like this

    5 votes
    1. [2]
      Bishop
      Link Parent
      this is what ya use your first comment on Tildes for? i'm honored. (and a bit curious if i've scared any new people away in my time here 😂)

      this is what ya use your first comment on Tildes for? i'm honored. (and a bit curious if i've scared any new people away in my time here 😂)

      4 votes
      1. FoxPopuli
        Link Parent
        Sure, why not? I don't talk a lot, but I do know what I like. And I think your poetry needs to be seen. Pleased to meet you.

        Sure, why not?
        I don't talk a lot, but I do know what I like.
        And I think your poetry needs to be seen.
        Pleased to meet you.

        2 votes