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  2. Comment on Workshop Wednesday II: we're back! in ~creative

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    Posted in last weeks thread first A few from the vault, excerpted from a Day of Observance and Unconventional Haikus a couple years back: Joints crack Muscles torn Stand up Gargling Tight abdomen...

    Posted in last weeks thread first

    A few from the vault, excerpted from a Day of Observance and Unconventional Haikus a couple years back:

    Joints crack
    Muscles torn
    Stand up

    Gargling
    Tight abdomen
    Poop

    Water surge
    Beat of drum
    Snowy peaks

    Unroll mat
    Open heart
    Listen

    Striped feathers
    Sings love song
    Blue throat

    Fresh and clean
    A throne fit for a king
    Splatter

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  3. Comment on Workshop Wednesday: Post a poem/story/writing-thing and get feedback! in ~creative

    ChickenPit
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    A few from the vault, excerpted from a Day of Observance and Unconventional Haikus a couple years back: Joints crack Muscles torn Stand up Gargling Tight abdomen Poop Water surge Beat of drum...

    A few from the vault, excerpted from a Day of Observance and Unconventional Haikus a couple years back:

    Joints crack
    Muscles torn
    Stand up

    Gargling
    Tight abdomen
    Poop

    Water surge
    Beat of drum
    Snowy peaks

    Unroll mat
    Open heart
    Listen

    Striped feathers
    Sings love song
    Blue throat

    Fresh and clean
    A thrown fit for a king
    Splatter

  4. Comment on Workshop Wednesday: Post a poem/story/writing-thing and get feedback! in ~creative

    ChickenPit
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    Really appreciate the clear feedback @acdw @cadadr Here’s another go: This old shovel Cuts green moss carpet In a perfect circle This old shovel Rusty chipped spade Strikes another rock This old...

    Really appreciate the clear feedback @acdw @cadadr

    Here’s another go:
    This old shovel
    Cuts green moss carpet
    In a perfect circle

    This old shovel
    Rusty chipped spade
    Strikes another rock

    This old shovel
    Black electric tape handle
    Tears callused skin

    This old shovel
    Rests tired backs
    In their final home

    This old shovel

    1 vote

  5. Comment on Workshop Wednesday: Post a poem/story/writing-thing and get feedback! in ~creative

    ChickenPit
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    This is a random one from my Notes that has never been shared: This old shovel Cuts the green moss carpet In a perfect circle This old shovel With chipped spade Strikes another rock This old...

    This is a random one from my Notes that has never been shared:

    This old shovel
    Cuts the green moss carpet
    In a perfect circle

    This old shovel
    With chipped spade
    Strikes another rock

    This old shovel
    With electrical tape handle
    Tears callused skin

    This old shovel
    Rests tired backs
    In their final home

    This old shovel

    2 votes