6 votes

we pay

we pay for the violence of others
blood yearns for blood to hurt
the warped spreads the scarlet
the horizons and the cliffs are rife
i endure for i bear the deep song

update: v2

3 comments

  1. [3]
    Devin
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    It almost rhymes....

    It almost rhymes....

    1 vote
    1. [2]
      widedub
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      If you've had limited exposure to poetry, you may be surprised to learn that its not all rhyming couplets and consistent meter Free Verse Blank verse

      If you've had limited exposure to poetry, you may be surprised to learn that its not all rhyming couplets and consistent meter

      Free Verse
      Blank verse

      5 votes
      1. Devin
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        These lyrics would make a great tune. Just reread them and beats popped all over the place. My bad, best of luck.

        These lyrics would make a great tune. Just reread them and beats popped all over the place. My bad, best of luck.