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    1. What creative projects have you been working on?

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on. Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just...

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on.

      Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just ideas.

      If you have any creative projects that you have been working on or want to eventually work on, this is a place for discussing those.

      10 votes
    2. What creative projects have you been working on?

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on. Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just...

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on.

      Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just ideas.

      If you have any creative projects that you have been working on or want to eventually work on, this is a place for discussing those.

      12 votes
    3. The Funny Men

      1 We are the funny men The laughter men Leaning together Headpiece filled with mirth. Alas! Our wavering voices, when We giggle together Are loud and senseless As hyenas in dry grass Or gales...

      1

      We are the funny men
      The laughter men
      Leaning together
      Headpiece filled with mirth. Alas!
      Our wavering voices, when

      We giggle together
      Are loud and senseless
      As hyenas in dry grass
      Or gales stirring shards of glass
      In our dry cellar

      Form of clay, color of slick.
      Fictitious force, turbulent motion;
      Those who have crossed
      With eyes darting to and fro,

      To death's other kingdom
      Remember us -- if at all --
      Not as grasping, violent souls
      But only as
      The funny men


      2

      Eyes I dare not meet in ads
      In death's advertisement kingdom
      These do not appear:
      There, the eyes are
      Blinding light on a broken column
      There, is a tube man swinging
      And voices are
      In the wind's singing
      More shrill and more booming
      Than a cancelled star.

      Let me be no nearer
      In death's advertisement kingdom
      Let me also wear
      Such deliberate disguises
      (Thinnest phone, cleanest drip, slickest rizz)
      On the grass
      Behaving as the wind behaves
      No nearer--

      Not that final meeting
      In the Find Out kingdom


      Here you go! I’ve rewritten the text to avoid direct reference to the theme:

      III

      This is the slop land
      This is swamp land
      Here, the seed rounds
      Are raised, here they receive
      The supplication of a gilded man's hand
      Under the twinkle of a parasite star.

      Is it like this
      In death's other kingdom
      Waking alone
      At the hour when we are
      Trembling with tenderness
      Fully sure that
      We and our money are soon parted.


      4

      The eyes are not here
      There are no eyes here
      In this valley of choking stars
      In this hollow valley
      The worms atop our kingdoms' bones.

      In this last of meeting places
      We wail together
      A barbaric yawp
      Gathered on this beach of the sunken river

      Sightless, unless
      The flames reappear
      As the perpetual star
      Tetraethyllead rose
      Of death's Find Out kingdom
      The hope only
      Of unserious men.


      5

      Baby shark
      Mommy shark
      Daddy shark
      Grandma shark


      Between the idea
      And the reality
      Between the motion
      And the act
      Falls the Comedy

                      Don’t want to meet your daddy

      Between the conception
      And the creation
      Between the emotion
      And the response
      Falls the Comedy

                      Just want you in my Caddy

      Between the desire
      And the spasm
      Between the potency
      And the existence
      Between the essence
      And the descent
      Falls the Comedy

                      Don’t want to meet your mama

      Just want to
      I’m just
      Just want to make you


      Grandpa shark
      Where’d they go
      No one’s here
      Sleep again

      14 votes
    4. What creative projects have you been working on?

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on. Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just...

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on.

      Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just ideas.

      If you have any creative projects that you have been working on or want to eventually work on, this is a place for discussing those.

      3 votes
    5. What creative projects have you been working on?

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on. Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just...

      This topic is part of a series. It is meant to be a place for users to discuss creative projects they have been working on.

      Projects can be personal, professional, physical, digital, or even just ideas.

      If you have any creative projects that you have been working on or want to eventually work on, this is a place for discussing those.

      15 votes