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Blue house

Posted by Grendel
Tags: poetry, poem, original content

Blue house
Foundation exposed
Brown threadbare carpet
White counters fadded dull
Wallpaper curled and yellow
Still it's theirs
Contentment abounds

3 comments

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    cfabbro
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    I was wondering where this poem was going at first, but genuinely smiled on reading the last 2 lines. Well done. :)

    I was wondering where this poem was going at first, but genuinely smiled on reading the last 2 lines. Well done. :)

    4 votes
    1. Grendel
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      Thanks! I'm really happy to hear that it brought someone a little joy, thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know

      Thanks! I'm really happy to hear that it brought someone a little joy, thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know

      4 votes
  2. unknown user
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    Aww, sweet.

    Aww, sweet.

    1 vote