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Limerick thread

A lim'rick is like a haiku
But five lines, not three; you add two
They're often licentious
Or funny; contentious
But they can be nice if you choose

13 comments

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    1. kfwyre
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      In fairness to all of our friends This site spreads 'cross Earth to its ends Rhythm is anguish In non-native language Perhaps that's a part of this trend?

      In fairness to all of our friends
      This site spreads 'cross Earth to its ends
      Rhythm is anguish
      In non-native language
      Perhaps that's a part of this trend?

      6 votes
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      ohyran
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      Here I would like to strongly protest That there's any fun found in anapaest Give me tits, shit and dicks In my limericks I leave formal format to the Readers Digest.

      Here I would like to strongly protest
      That there's any fun found in anapaest
      Give me tits, shit and dicks
      In my limericks
      I leave formal format to the Readers Digest.

      3 votes
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        1. ohyran
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          This worlds weirdest rap battle gotta stop, can't spend the day writing on my laptop. Meters so-so - although I would rather have flow So now I gotta go. Peace out! [Mic drop]

          This worlds weirdest rap battle gotta stop,
          can't spend the day writing on my laptop.
          Meters so-so -
          although I would rather have flow
          So now I gotta go. Peace out! [Mic drop]

          4 votes
  2. ohyran
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    The fun in a limerick is the rhyme and a fine format with five lines But avoid aliteration all it achieves is aggrevation and it's just a waste of your time.

    The fun in a limerick is the rhyme
    and a fine format with five lines
    But avoid aliteration
    all it achieves is aggrevation
    and it's just a waste of your time.

    8 votes
  3. ohyran
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    Brittle bleached bones break as we walk, dead ashen trees the colour of chalk. The sky is on fire, when asked said a liar: "Climate Change is just left wing hippie talk"

    Brittle bleached bones break as we walk,
    dead ashen trees the colour of chalk.
    The sky is on fire,
    when asked said a liar:
    "Climate Change is just left wing hippie talk"

    6 votes
  4. PahoojyMan
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    There once was a man from Australia, Who painted his arse like a dahlia, The linework was fine, The colour divine, But the smell? Ah, that was the failure.

    There once was a man from Australia,
    Who painted his arse like a dahlia,
    The linework was fine,
    The colour divine,
    But the smell? Ah, that was the failure.

    6 votes
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    moocow1452
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    So I finally saw Bill and Ted, The new third one, and here's what I said; "One was fun, two was dumb, Three was both dumb and fun, Why couldn't Star Wars be like this, instead?"

    So I finally saw Bill and Ted,
    The new third one, and here's what I said;
    "One was fun, two was dumb,
    Three was both dumb and fun,
    Why couldn't Star Wars be like this, instead?"

    3 votes
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      1. ohyran
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        ooof that was one hell of a good line :D

        Inner-space-invader lightsaber

        ooof that was one hell of a good line :D

        4 votes
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    ohyran
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    Limericks was popularized by a man named Lear but his poems never went anywhere. He would write them just fine but would as such, always repeat the first line: "That silly old poet Edward Lear"...

    Limericks was popularized by a man named Lear
    but his poems never went anywhere.
    He would write them just fine
    but would as such, always repeat the first line:
    "That silly old poet Edward Lear"

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_(poetry)#Edward_Lear

    3 votes
    1. balooga
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      Dear sir or madam will you hear My book, based on one by Lear Since money is tighter A paperback writer Is my most desired career

      Dear sir or madam will you hear
      My book, based on one by Lear
      Since money is tighter
      A paperback writer
      Is my most desired career

      1 vote
  7. kfwyre
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    "The classes must open", they said "The kids will learn better in stead" The teachers who left us Were really quite deft ones The rest of us breathe air in dread

    "The classes must open", they said
    "The kids will learn better in stead"
    The teachers who left us
    Were really quite deft ones
    The rest of us breathe air in dread

    3 votes
  8. krg
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    this drink in hand tastes rather bland though i still smile but for a while pretense be damned

    this drink in hand
    tastes rather bland
    though i still smile
    but for a while
    pretense be damned

    2 votes
  9. Moonchild
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    There once was a man from Nantucket...

    There once was a man from Nantucket...