26 votes

4 words poetry challenge

Four words,
no exceptions.

91 comments

  1. [4]
    vivaria
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    Sorry, fountain. Needed change.

    Sorry, fountain.
    Needed change.

    24 votes
    1. [3]
      vivaria
      (edited )
      Link Parent
      Frayed. No brushstrokes left.

      Frayed. No brushstrokes left.

      4 votes
      1. [2]
        vivaria
        Link Parent
        Pages scent, received warmly.

        Pages scent, received warmly.

        3 votes
        1. vivaria
          Link Parent
          Nest, once lonely: ours.

          Nest, once lonely: ours.

          2 votes
  2. Amarok
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    Fucking fucker's fucking fucked. (ancient technician mantra)

    Fucking fucker's
    fucking fucked.

    (ancient technician mantra)

    15 votes
  3. [18]
    The_Fad
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    My neck, My back.

    My neck,
    My back.

    14 votes
    1. [4]
      vivaria
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      My sides! They're splitting!

      My sides!
      They're splitting!

      6 votes
      1. [3]
        mundane_and_naive
        Link Parent
        Hey! Contraction is cheating!

        Hey!
        Contraction is cheating!

        5 votes
        1. [2]
          kfwyre
          Link Parent
          They shouldn't've... But did.

          They shouldn't've...
          But did.

          5 votes
          1. CALICO
            Link Parent
            I'dn't've, you'dn't've. 'twou'dn't, y'all'd've.

            I'dn't've, you'dn't've.
            'twou'dn't, y'all'd've.

            14 votes
    2. unknown user
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      My sympathy, my shoulderblade!

      My sympathy,
      my shoulderblade!

      3 votes
    3. kfwyre
      Link Parent
      Not yours, you plagiarist!

      Not yours,
      you plagiarist!

      2 votes
    4. [11]
      firstname
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      Lick my pussy and my crack - Khia
      1 vote
      1. [9]
        Algernon_Asimov
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        Six is not four.

        Six is not four.

        5 votes
        1. [9]
          Comment deleted by author
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          1. [8]
            Algernon_Asimov
            Link Parent
            "My pussy. My crack."

            "My pussy. My crack."

            2 votes
            1. [7]
              unknown user
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              @firstname Algernon lastname polemics :P take it easy guys!

              @firstname Algernon
              lastname polemics :P


              take it easy
              guys!

              2 votes
      2. DrScump
        Link Parent
        Second 'my' redundant anyway.

        Second 'my' redundant anyway.

  4. teaearlgraycold
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    Paying interest, Emotional debt.

    Paying interest,

    Emotional debt.

    12 votes
  5. the_walrus
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    "The usual." "Rough week?"

    "The usual."
    "Rough week?"

    6 votes
  6. DrScump
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    Lossless Haiku Compression, perhaps?

    Lossless Haiku Compression, perhaps?

    6 votes
  7. gpl
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    Open window, summer scents.

    Open window,
    summer scents.

    5 votes
  8. [3]
    mrbig
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    Her period is peaceful

    Her period is peaceful

    5 votes
    1. [2]
      DrScump
      Link Parent
      Questionmark, not so much.

      Questionmark, not so much.

      1 vote
      1. mrbig
        Link Parent
        The child is not. Phew!

        The child is not. Phew!

        2 votes
  9. lawful-lazy
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    Jackets cover yesternight's lapses.

    Jackets cover yesternight's lapses.

    5 votes
  10. Triple_Soft
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    Not perfect, Posted anyways.

    Not perfect,
    Posted anyways.

    5 votes
  11. kfwyre
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    Bad date Up late

    Bad date
    Up late

    4 votes
  12. Bauke
    Link
    Few word do trick.

    Few word do trick.

    4 votes
  13. [2]
    zlsa
    (edited )
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    A soft, sunny meadow. A trail, winding North. Hiking beneath the mountains. The pastel setting sun. Clouds like watercolor streaks. Waterfall, sparkling with moonlight. Silent snowfall in...

    A soft, sunny meadow.

    A trail, winding North.

    Hiking beneath the mountains.

    The pastel setting sun.

    Clouds like watercolor streaks.

    Waterfall, sparkling with moonlight.

    Silent snowfall in darkness.

    Cold morning, hot campfire.

    Farewell, forest. Let's return.

    I may have gone a bit overboard. I tried to make each poem stand alone, but also flow together with each other.

    Also, I'd be remiss to not mention my personal favorite four-word poem:

    The stars, like dust.

    - Isaac Asimov

    4 votes
    1. Algernon_Asimov
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      Those four words you've quoted are just an opening phrase. The poem itself has a few more than four words: https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/8090242-the-stars-like-dust-encircle-me-in-living-mists-of

      Those four words you've quoted are just an opening phrase. The poem itself has a few more than four words:

      The stars, like dust, encircle me
      In living mists of light;
      And all of space I seem to see
      In one vast burst of sight.

      https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/8090242-the-stars-like-dust-encircle-me-in-living-mists-of

      3 votes
  14. [2]
    archevel
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    Inevitably Socrates faces oblivion

    Inevitably Socrates faces oblivion

    4 votes
    1. DrScump
      Link Parent
      Socrates: "I drank what?!"

      Socrates: "I drank what?!"

      3 votes
  15. CALICO
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    Dust Slime Iron Soot

    Dust
    Slime
    Iron
    Soot

    3 votes
  16. shaunxcode
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    Ground beef. Bound grief.

    Ground beef.
    Bound grief.

    3 votes
  17. patience_limited
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    Woulda, coulda, shoulda? Hadda.

    Woulda, coulda, shoulda? Hadda.

    3 votes
  18. [3]
    moocow1452
    (edited )
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    Ugh... Piss off, cat!

    Ugh...

    Piss off, cat!

    3 votes
    1. [2]
      moocow1452
      (edited )
      Link Parent
      Also, Dog? Stop pooping.

      Also, Dog? Stop pooping.

      4 votes
  19. patience_limited
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    Lost snow, too hot. [I like this game.]

    Lost snow, too hot.

    [I like this game.]

    3 votes
  20. [2]
    Gaywallet
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    I'm wearing pants, promise!

    I'm wearing pants, promise!

    3 votes
    1. Octofox
      Link Parent
      Remote workers life story.

      Remote workers life story.

      2 votes
  21. DrScump
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    But noone listens anymore.

    But noone listens anymore.

    3 votes
  22. acdw
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    so dark it breathes

    so
    dark it
    breathes

    3 votes
  23. unknown user
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    Plums weep, night whitens.

    Plums weep,
    night whitens.

    2 votes
  24. ruspaceni
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    Photograph wanes, feelings emerge.

    Photograph wanes,

    feelings emerge.

    2 votes
  25. yellow
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    Without Life, Nothing Floats

    Without Life, Nothing Floats

    2 votes
  26. [6]
    vili
    (edited )
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    Tuntussuqatarniksaitengqiggtuq! Polysynthetic languages win

    Tuntussuqatarniksaitengqiggtuq!
    Polysynthetic languages win

    2 votes
    1. [4]
      unknown user
      Link Parent
      Brought missiles to catfight :P

      Brought missiles
      to catfight

      :P

      4 votes
      1. [3]
        vili
        Link Parent
        Humanist degree Finally pays!

        Humanist degree
        Finally pays!

        1 vote
        1. [2]
          unknown user
          Link Parent
          Fellow humanist! Finnish rocks!

          Fellow humanist!
          Finnish rocks!

          2 votes
    2. vili
      Link Parent
      EpÀjÀrjestelmÀllistyttÀmÀttömyydellisyydettömyydellÀnsÀhÀnkökÀÀn: agglutinatives also cool!

      EpÀjÀrjestelmÀllistyttÀmÀttömyydellisyydettömyydellÀnsÀhÀnkökÀÀn:
      agglutinatives also cool!

      2 votes
  27. Algernon_Asimov
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    cocoa slippers book contentment

    cocoa
    slippers
    book
    contentment

    2 votes
  28. Algernon_Asimov
    Link
    Proposal? Accepted! Pleased? Afraid!

    Proposal?
    Accepted!
    Pleased?
    Afraid!

    2 votes
  29. [2]
    diode
    Link
    Is Rhyming Required Here?

    Is Rhyming Required Here?

    2 votes
    1. unknown user
      Link Parent
      No, just four words!

      No, just four words!

      2 votes
  30. DrScump
    Link
    I have no words.

    I have no words.

    2 votes
  31. izik1
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    no rhyme, no reason

    no rhyme, no reason

    2 votes
  32. Elronnd
    Link
    Sorry; I have Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia

    Sorry; I have

    Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia

    2 votes
  33. [2]
    welly
    Link
    Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo.

    Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo.

    2 votes
  34. moocow1452
    Link
    One, two, three, floor.

    One, two, three, floor.

    2 votes
  35. lefterho
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    burnt out disoriented perseverant

    burnt out
    disoriented
    perseverant

    2 votes
  36. firstname
    Link
    Midday, Monday, Cotton head.

    Midday,
    Monday,
    Cotton head.

    1 vote
  37. frickindeal
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    He breathed She screamed

    He breathed
    She screamed

    1 vote
  38. Sir_Shakes
    Link
    Empty daily mourning coffee.

    Empty daily mourning coffee.

    1 vote
  39. asoftbird
    Link
    I like this thread.

    I like this thread.

    1 vote
  40. KBPrinceO
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    Billy let go, again.

    Billy let go, again.

    1 vote
  41. [3]
    vakieh
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    This poem's broken rules.

    This poem's broken rules.

    1. [2]
      unknown user
      Link Parent
      Rules are made to be broken!

      Rules are made to be broken!

      1. unknown user
        Link Parent
        My very existence is rebellion!

        My very existence is rebellion!

  42. firstname
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    Thread like Dark Souls

    Thread like Dark Souls