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    1. Let's cry sometimes, together

      I had a little interaction over at the local ~health.mental monthly meeting that sprouted the idea of trying to create a kind of poetry/illustrated book together. Original comment, for reference I...

      I had a little interaction over at the local ~health.mental monthly meeting that sprouted the idea of trying to create a kind of poetry/illustrated book together.

      Original comment, for reference

      I moved back to my parent's place, and mentally that has been hard because of past trauma issues related to the place.

      But I've come up with many coping mechanisms and meditate a lot. So that has been helping.

      But I still cry sometimes.

      I think the cadence is kind of sweet and an interesting base to tell small stories (either as part of a larger story or independent) from daily life.

      As I wrote there I think having each spread of the book in the same format will drive the point across best: that no matter how life is, sometimes we cry and that's probably a good thing.

      Well, let's see if we can come up with similar short stories, or just talk about the idea, or share a drawing that you'd like to show us that you think would fit.

      copyleft or -right? Honestly, I cba, but sure that might be something to discuss down the line, maybe, but assume everything posted will get scraped/stolen/used as always :*
      14 votes
    2. Poetry discussion: Everything by Srikanth Reddy

      Hi tildizens, the NYC subway often has posters with a poem and artwork on them which provide some relief from the ads that decorate the trains. On my commute today, I found this poem by Srikanth...

      Hi tildizens, the NYC subway often has posters with a poem and artwork on them which provide some relief from the ads that decorate the trains. On my commute today, I found this poem by Srikanth Reddy quite tantalizing.


      Everything

      by Srikanth Reddy

      She was watching the solar eclipse
      through a piece of broken bottle

      when he left home.
      He found a blue kite in the forest

      on the day she lay down
      with a sailor. When his name changed,

      she stitched a cloud to a quilt
      made of rags. They did not meet,

      so they never could be parted.
      So she finished her prayer,

      & he folded his map of the sea.


      Unfortunately, the single piece of related online discourse I can find is a two-line comment on a 2008 blog post of the poem. So tell me: do you like this poem? What do you make of it? Is it about a couple that splits up due to infidelity (as Google's gemini ai told me) or people that are connected despite having never met (as Mistral's le chat claims)? What of the kite? Why is it blue? Why might his name have changed? To me, it seems he must be a sailor (but different than the one she lays with?) and she relatively poor. We're reading a lament of a missed connection, perhaps.

      13 votes
    3. penghu

      an endless blue. my island shore. my quiet voice. a crashing roar. my little feet mark steps in sand. a big red bucket in my hand. cold water glides across my gills. it tastes of dark and salt and...

      an endless blue. my island shore.
      my quiet voice. a crashing roar.
      my little feet mark steps in sand.
      a big red bucket in my hand.

      cold water glides across my gills.
      it tastes of dark and salt and kills.
      i hunt for food hoping to make
      what others all of me want made.

      i cuff my pants and dip my toes
      to cool myself from hot sand's glow.
      my bucket drinks with thirsty lips
      salt water, sand, and -- wait, what's this ?

      in rest i lie where currents go:
      to waters warm, bright, and shallow.
      a sudden wake from surface stirs:
      swimming around a big red blur.

      i look at her. i look at him.
      i puff in fear. i'm uncertain.
      i dip my fingers holding shrimp.
      i take a bite. we make friends quick.

      11 votes
    4. Poem from my 13-year-old son

      The Skibidi Wonderland Imagine a world with skibidi rizz Where the rivers run with flowberry fizz Every tree has a W gyat Everyone is ruled under Kai Cenat Everything, even the hills looksmax...

      The Skibidi Wonderland

      Imagine a world with skibidi rizz

      Where the rivers run with flowberry fizz

      Every tree has a W gyat

      Everyone is ruled under Kai Cenat

      Everything, even the hills looksmax

      Criminals will have to pay a fanum tax

      Every December we celebrate Rizzmas

      Where we get candy and gifts from St. Grimace

      From the screen to the ring to the pen to the king

      Every October we celebrate Hawktuahween

      Everyone follows the sigma grindset

      Everyone thinks with the sigma mindset

      The skibidi sky has a rizzy aurora

      All citizens have skibidi aura

      Can you imagine a world where all is rizzy?

      Can you think of a world where all is skibidi?

      Can you fathom a world where all cheese is drippy?

      'Cause I yearn for a world where I can hit the griddy

      50 votes
    5. Echoes of the Depths

      The earth, once scarred by shadow’s hand, Now trembles soft, a waking land. From soil soaked with roots that bled, New shoots arise where death had fed. The storm has passed, its howling stilled,...

      The earth, once scarred by shadow’s hand,
      Now trembles soft, a waking land.
      From soil soaked with roots that bled,
      New shoots arise where death had fed.

      The storm has passed, its howling stilled,
      The air now warm, the silence filled.
      With whispers light, the seeds take hold,
      Their leaves like sparks of green and gold.

      The soil hums with tender grace,
      A pulse of life begins its race.
      No longer bound by gloom’s demand,
      It rises tall, a fearless stand.

      Though remnants of the past remain,
      They sing of hope, not loss or pain.
      The cycle turns, as it must do—
      To bury old, and birth the new.

      7 votes